tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397719611340975744.post1584787763072763292..comments2023-10-30T03:41:02.088-07:00Comments on Writing for our Lives: Fitzgerald Style Analysisruss.ahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04026735195353132911noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397719611340975744.post-70517906086510098672011-05-27T17:44:49.453-07:002011-05-27T17:44:49.453-07:00As this basically the final style analysis, it dem...As this basically the final style analysis, it demonstrates how I have developed as a writer and thinker this year. Comparing it to many of my earlier writings, a difference in wordiness is apparent, but a difference in depth is also notable. As opposed to simply saying a basic, somewhat superficial meaning, such as in my analisis of Silent Spring, this time I actually understood and pulled meaning from a passage that was somewhat abstract even, with its talk of melting buildings and dark fields. <br /><br />Overall, this piece shows my evolution as a writer and thinker over the year, to a satisfactory extent at least.russ.ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026735195353132911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3397719611340975744.post-12488949338823857812011-03-28T08:46:56.205-07:002011-03-28T08:46:56.205-07:00I love the way you tie (subtly in the intro and cl...I love the way you tie (subtly in the intro and clearly in the conclusion) the people of the 20's blindness to our own dim wit today. Humanity does seem blind to our overconsumption--as if we can consume and consume with no end in sight.Mrs. Huffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05821827020872181303noreply@blogger.com